I can almost see this working, this got a single laugh out of me, but Foamy is still as annoying as ever, but I think you're taking the right steps on the right direction
Almost.
First of all, you should try to get someone to do voices for you, the "woman's" voice is so jarring to listen because it's so obvious that it's a guy voicing it, if you played it as a joke like "lol the woman has a guy's voice" that wouldn't be as bad, but the fact it's unintentional doesn't really help
The animation is also pretty bad
The way you jump and stretch feels so unnatural, it doesn't click and it just feels like you're playing around flash too much without minding how it's going to look in the final product
Either learn to jump and stretch or just try a different animation technique to make the animations feel more natural
And I think these dialogues would really benefit from more background noise like a crowd talking on the background or more music.